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This is my first attempt at getting this new song into some kind of order. Musically, it's very rudimentary and I could use some tips on getting it to flow better. It's a love song to the planet, I think. I dunno, I just write the stuff.
Harley Benton TE-52 NA Vintage Series
Electric Guitar
159 €
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February 17, 2024 at 10:18 PM
February 18, 2024 at 2:05 AM
February 16, 2024 at 7:46 PM
Shamika
Lots of reasons to enjoy this song WanHu. Interesting story, a great, steady vocal and a clever little connecting guitar riff. Well done :)
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February 17, 2024 at 3:15 PM
February 18, 2024 at 2:07 AM
February 18, 2024 at 8:55 AM
shiihs
This sounds pretty impressive already. You sing very well! I don't think this music would benefit from a too complex arrangement. Perhaps one tip (since you explicitly asked for some tips) when singing "turbulence" around 1:41, I would prolong the "u" instead of the "r" sound so "tuuuuurbulence instead of "turrrrrrbulence".
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March 3, 2024 at 12:03 AM
WanHu
Thanks shiihs. I've afraid the extended rrrrrr... is going to have to stay, I still have a Glasgow accent but I haven't lived in the city for 40 years:|
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February 18, 2024 at 2:45 PM
Unplugged backing tracks with Vocals & Acoustic Guitar:
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